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Otalia drabble - Shame

TITLE: Shame
AUTHOR: Wonko
FANDOM: Guiding Light
WORD COUNT: 100
SPOILERS: For 5/5.

When Natalia went to the spa she took her closet with her – literally. But she’s back from the spa now and she’s still carting it around, metaphorically this time. It’s with her everywhere she goes. It’s in the tension of her muscles when Olivia strolls beside her, in the thundering of her heart when strangers look at them twice in the street. It’s in the sweat on her palms as Olivia reaches out to take her hand.

“You can have my love or your shame,” Olivia whispers. “Not both.”

When Natalia’s fingers squeeze hers tighter, Olivia knows what she’s chosen.

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This was very short but very good. Very powerful. And I must say it helped me look at this week's episodes a little differently. Helped ease my frustration a bit. I think part of my angst with how frustrating things are progressing is the feeling of watching the big clock to September count down. And yeah, I think they're overdoing things a bit much for the drama, but there are also times when I remember my own experiences and get a reminder from a well-written piece like this. Thanks.
Thank you. Part of this comes from my own experiences/frustrations from being with a closeted partner. I understand both sides, but I'm totally with Olivia on this one.
A Lovely little piece illuminating the tension between them very well! It will be interesting to see how the GL writers will get them synchronized as to how they'll be comfortable togethere
Yes, that'll be nice to see. IF THEY EVER STOP FREAKIN TALKING ABOUT WHAT THEY ARE! KISS ALREADY!

Ahem. Uh...sorry.
Oh no apologies necessary we're all right there with you!
Really powerful short piece!
Thank you :-)
This is an example of drabble perfection. Well done!
Wow, thank you so much :-)
This was beautiful. Very, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. Awesome writing as always. :D
Thank you :-)
Awww! Short but sweet. ^_^ Just what I needed in the middle of my research paper, haha. ^_^
You should be working ::Gives you a stern look::

Nah - I wrote/read fanfic all the way through writing my dissertation/studying for finals. My theory is that fanfic is good for study!
Well, if you don't want me to post the last bit of Hero Myth... Just kidding! Haha, no, seriously, I am working, I promise! *innocent smile*

Oh yeah, fanfic is keeping mem from going crazy here! If I never write another Research Report... wishful thinking, that's what I get for taking a second degree. -_-
Well, if you don't want me to post the last bit of Hero Myth...

::Narrows eyes at you:: Gimme.
Hehe ;p I will, as soon as I finish my research paper; that's my reward for myself, to work on something I enjoy if I finish that monstrosity. Probably posting late tonight or early tomorrow...
Very nice
Thanks :-)
“You can have my love or your shame,” Olivia whispers. “Not both.” - Wow. What a fantastic line.
Thank you very much :-)
Damn right she's chosen Olivia! xD You're incredible, m'dear. Being able to say so much and pack so much emotion into so few words - it's a gift, really.
Who would choose anything else? Thanks!
Aw, she made the right choice.
Damn right.
So much impact in so few words! Lovely job!
Thank you :-)
Yay Natalia for making the right choice. I mean, c'mon, it was a given. :o)

Another lovely piece. Thank you very much!
Thank you :-)
“You can have my love or your shame,” Olivia whispers. “Not both.”

Well said! loved it!
Sorry for the late reply. Thank you!
Wow. That just really said everything in so few words. This was amazing.
Thank you very much.
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