lostnfoundcause (lostnfoundcause) wrote in passion_perfect,

  • Location:
  • Mood:
  • Music:

Lunar Soul Ch 20

Well I just finished a very interesting chapter, hopefully you will all think so, but for now I leave you with this tid bit.  Ch 20 isn't small, but for the chapter I just finished, all I can say is that I officially made this fic a NC-17 fic.  And that is all.  :D To the story! On a side note if some of you want to see this on an Otalia fic journal, let me know, because I'm not in any and if you think they would enjoy this i would be more then happy to post it there as well.  :]

Title: A Lunar Soul 

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia Rating: R- for language and violence Disclaimer:  Characters, show, actors, etc. do not belong to me, I am not making any money so please don't  sue.  Thanks. Author's Note: An AU in which Natalia and Olivia meet under different circumstances.  Some things still the same, some not.  Natalia's storyline is changed the most, she is a cop.

 Beta- Q.


CH 20

The feeling got a little worse when she got to work, but it was oddly slow on a full moon night.  A full moon tended to bring out the crazies.  There were a lot of speculations as to why it was true, but most of it really didn’t matter.  There was really only one explanation Natalia would remember and it came from an instructor she had at the academy.  When someone asked why full moons bring out the crazies the instructor’s answer was simple.  ‘Because they have better lighting.’  Natalia always did smile when she remembered that saying.  She couldn’t help it, it was a habit.

            “Wheels up Rivera, we have an armed perp at the docks.  There’s not a lot of info just that he is tall wearing a blue or black shirt, jeans, and dark hair.  They think they broke into a supply warehouse.”  Remy said as he got his gear and keys to the car.

            “Great, and I had three hours of perfect paper work left.  Alright, let’s get this done.”  Natalia said as she went to their car. 


Natalia parked the car in a parking lot near the docks and went to the place.  The lights weren’t on but the clear sound of shuffling through things echoed throughout the docks.  “Great.”  Natalia said quietly to the left side of the door.  Luckily, both of them would be on different sides.   Natalia signed Remy to follow her lead quietly.  She wanted to go in first so she signaled him to hold position and went in first.  She should have known better than to go in first and not the rookie.  As soon as she crossed the threshold, she felt a heavy metal object hit the side of her of her face.  ‘Great,’ was the last thing she thought of before she was taken in by the concussion.


            “Rivera, can you hear me?  Natalia, can you hear me?!”  Remy asked over his downed partner.  He had subdued that perp but not before he got one good hit on his partner.  He saw it coming but wasn’t sure how to warn her.  It was too late for her to block it, and moving her head might have made it worse.  So he all he could do was watch and then move in quickly to stop the bastard.  He had him in cuffs in two seconds and then he went to call the paramedics and see if his partner was ok.  By the time the paramedics got there Natalia was already starting to stir.

            “Oh great… that’s gonna leave a mark.”  Natalia moaned as she rubbed the side of her head and felt the blood and bump that showed where the impact was.  She knew that they would insist her going to the hospital, but she didn’t want to wait, and by now it was time for her to go home. 

            “Natalia, what are you doing?  You shouldn’t try to move.”  Remy said panicked.  He knew she might not want to stick around for the paramedics to take her in.  She was stubborn that way.

            “I would rather just go back to the office and then get a ride home.  I don’t want to be in a freaking hospital the whole night.”  Natalia said, knowing that this kind of night tended to have the most amount of traffic through there urgent and emergency care.

            “No, you have to…”  Remy started before he watched the officer pick herself up and walk to their car and sit herself down in the passenger side.  He rolled his eyes as he watched her shoo the EMTs away.  ‘Great I’m going to need back up to send my back up home.’  Remy thought as he got in and started the car.


Tags: fic, guiding light

  • Post a new comment


    Anonymous comments are disabled in this journal

    default userpic

    Your reply will be screened